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Glory
Jun 11, 2012 17:37:01 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2012 17:37:01 GMT -6
Name: Pride's Glory(Glory). Gender: Mare. Age (yr 2): 5 Region:West. Physical Appearance:She is a blueroan with no markings or scars. I have a picture attached just ignore the markings and the human things in the picture. Glory also had dapples all over her as well. When the sun shines on them it makes her pelt look as if they are covered in diamonds. It also makes her blue roan pelt look lighter then it normally is. Personality:Glory is shy and listens well manialy to do with that of her history. She was the bottom of the herd. Even newborns were above her in the herds eyes. She is also sweet and kind. That shows almost as much as her shyness. Her shyness was caused by her herd as how well she listens. I suppose you could even say she kind of like a slave except she wasn't. They didn't allow her to do anything except eat and drink and follow were ever the herd moved. History:Glory was kicked out of her father's herd when she was two. She travelled here. Her father and herd is what made her personality the way it is. She was the bottom of the herd to begin with even newborns were above her in ther herds eyes and in their own. She was kicked out as soon as she could survive. She was luckily given that long. Most wanted to kick her out as soon as they could while some said let her stay till she can fend for herself. Now she found her way here. Attachments:
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Glory
Jun 11, 2012 17:48:23 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2012 17:48:23 GMT -6
Hi love, welcome to Geneva Valley. I'd love to accept your character, but there are a couple of things I would like you to change. There really isn't a required length for how long each section her bio needs to be, but we encourage everyone to write at least a good 3 or 4 sentences in each section, so I ask you to please do that for her appearance and personality.
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Glory
Jun 11, 2012 17:58:29 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2012 17:58:29 GMT -6
Ok. I fixed the errors. It should be good now.
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Glory
Jun 11, 2012 18:25:14 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2012 18:25:14 GMT -6
That's what we're looking for, thank you. She's accepted and l you can start playing for her!
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Glory
Jun 11, 2012 18:41:04 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2012 18:41:04 GMT -6
Ok. Thanks!
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